Saturday, May 28, 2016

I am poem


I am…
Success Criteria
Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary
Choose the best nouns for the poem
Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns
Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you


I am a gamer
I wonder if the world might all of a sudden fade away
I hear the night sky calling me
I see the terror in everyone life’s  
I want to be help full for the world
I am a gamer
I pretend to fight crime  
I feel the xbox in my hand with a leathery touch               
I touch the controller and play skylanders!
I worry the when the world ENDS!
I cry when I’m sad
I am a gamer
I understand that when your mean someone's mean to you
I say that everything is ok even when it’s not
I dream of nothing ( I don’t have dreams )
I try to help people survive when they're lost
I hope to make a difference

I am a gamer


I am proud of my I am poem because it had to have all thought in your head is you thinking you. It was hard thinking about me because every thing about me is the same, so I just followed the plan
and then that's when everything change and my friends move in and that's how I got most of my work.I learnt that sometimes it helps to talk to other people to help me think. 

4 comments:

  1. Wow Joseph you have done a great job putting yourself in the poem........great you talked to your friends and you then listened to them ........Grandma

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  2. Wow Joseph you have done a great job putting yourself in the poem........great you talked to your friends and you then listened to them ........Grandma

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  3. Oh dear Joseph......I seem to have repeated myself.....

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  4. That's quite a poem you have written there. You always have been clever at writing Joseph
    .....Dad

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